

He’s waiting for the federal government to solve it for him. That way he can both get away with not spending much, and having someone to pin the blame on if things go sideways. So right now I think he’s waiting for Carney to start these federal initiatives so he can play the partner.
I would keep away the bits about fascism and the choice between similar parties and all that. Instead I’d frame it around a simple argument about making it easy to elect them instead of losing seats to vote split. Every candidate/MP understands vote split and how it can deprive them from holding their seat/job. Also add in that context that you want to make it easy for you and your family and friends to elect them. Framing it in simple terms that describe benefit to them instead of moral / ethical terms should gain more traction with anyone looking at it, from the staff member reading the email to the MP if they get to read it. Staying away from fascism avoids potentially thought halting terms. If the audience already knows the problems with the current system in the terms described in OP’s blob, chances are they’re already on the electoral reform boat.