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  • Love it, had me bopping along.

    Main comment would to look at song structure and phrasing. ie, thinking in blocks of 16 bars for the major segments of your track. You could sit with each theme for a full 16 bars make it a 5 min track without anything really new. Dropping down to the hats and snare section around 1.20 can be twice as long before rushing into the build.

    That full build is nice, but build right back into a ‘chorus’ with the vocals and the highest part of your track. That section you go into at 2.15 feels more like a runout at the end, switch that round with the vocals first, and then the instrumental to end.

    The second half has some nice twiddly sweeps and hints that a change is coming. But in the first half, most of the changes are quite abrupt between major sections. eg. when the drums drop in and the tune drops out at the same time. When the vocals are in you have a nice FM static type punctuation of every 4 bars. More of that kind of thing for a major shift! EDM goes overboard with them but used sparingly they make a track easier to listen to. Deadmou5 on some of his livestreams in the studio talks about them a lot. either a muted drum roll into the change, a simple filter sweep, dropping out a couple of drum channels for half a bar, an increasing echo, or many many other little fiddly bits to carry you over the change.